This game is really fun so far! I'm excited to follow it through it's development.
A few things I noticed: after picking Myrdril's pronouns they weren't always correct, I only noticed one spot with the wrong one but there was also a spot where it was grammatically wrong like she instead of her. I also noticed what I think is supposed to be Myrdril's name show up spelt wrong something like $yrdile, I don't remember exactly where they were but if you need to know I can happily retrace my choices to find them
best of luck! I'll be patiently waiting for the next update :]
Thank you so much for playing and I'm really glad you enjoyed it 😊 The game started off as a way to start learning how to code using Twine, so I wasn't the best at coding when I first published the game 😅
The game isn't too long, so I'm sure i can find where the errors were. Thank you spotting them! Hopefully, when I'm done writing the next chapter of my main game, I can come back to finishing chapter 3 😊