I like it. A few spelling errors and the story doesn't go into much depth, but it definitely has some potential. Will you be adding in choices for us to influence the story?
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i plan(already coded on a test build) on adding some sandbox features(the only choices i plan of making for now are the ending, which girl you will end up with and etc... i also planned to make choices like corruption or love route but i had way less coding knowledge and cancelled it but right now this is actually viable to add...)