That was an amazing read, my expectations were set pretty high after reading the comments, but damn it really delivered!
The writing is phenomenal, and I lol'd a considerable amount of times. All characters are really well written imo but Byte takes the cake for me.
Can't wait for the next build that's coming next week, thanks so much for your work and keep it up! This story and VN as a whole has so much potential, can't wait to see what there is in store for us.
To anyone considerating giving it a go, I highly suggest you do It grabs you during the first 10 mins and doesn't let go (played the entire thing in one sitting, and it's by no means short for a first build).