There was a lot more to this entry than I was expecting. The art is fantastic and the story is excellent. I thought I'd guessed the twist, but it turned out I was slightly off base. I thought I'd I think the pacing was generally good, though I did rush through things a bit because I was in a hurry.
I have two fairly minor nitpicks. The first is that some cutscenes rely much too heavily on text rather than images and animation. The second is the dearth of interactivity; there are a few decision points but many very long stretches of just clicking through text.
Still, this is a very strong entry, especially for something that was made in eight days, and I enjoyed it a lot. The sequel hook at the end excites me, too.