I love the idea behind the game and it's very cool that you were able to get so much done in two weeks working alone! The game reminded me of the droid segments in the first KOTOR game :) The shaders are definitely pretty awesome, although there are a few visual bugs, this is a really pretty game.
Most of the things that could be improved with the game are little things, like the playing being able to move before an animation finishes, the lack of AA and postprocessing, grammar errors, etc. No geral, muito bom!