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Lovely illustrated itch page and living book. I will give some feedback to each part:

- Los Cadejos: Great opening, I really liked the mood, sound effects and the intro screen. The interactive part to drag the wolf was the best, I would love a small sound effect on completion. Almost felt like fighting againt the evil wolf. A typewriting effect could also add a little.

- Art gallery: A ton of stories to explore with nice music and transitions

- Book of el salvador: Many beautiful pictures about the country, which were integrated in the art gallery - cool :) Also the slider is helpful. Some small notes would be nice!

General:

- Many supported languages, impressive!

Ideas: 

- A share button, to share a story which you really liked with your friends

- A marker/ checkmark or something similar to know which storys one has already read in the gallery overview

Overall great work and awesome opportunity to learn about the culture!