found a correction that could be made, when interacting with Selena, in one of her dialogs she says "That's my (name). <3 Now rest, my studly champion. You've deserved it. <3 " I feel like that should either be You deserve it, or you've earned it. Or maybe I'm completely off here, I'm not an english major XD.
So far in my playthrough I've absolutely adored the game. Yall are doing great with this. Hopefully by the time I've finished it I'll have more good things to say. The Fox Lady scene is fantastic, props to whoever wrote that.