Hi Ben Dover I was reading your guide and found that in the lizard celebration you don't specify the stats check for the speech part, for "just look good" is appearance 13 & for "make a passionate speech" is charisma 13.
Also I noticed you don't have the part for the lizardman egg quest there's another stats check. There's 4 options available here:
1- the default "take the risk" you lose health
2- agility 13 "be quick",
3- perception 13 "be sneaky"
4- "smoke bomb" if you have learned the recipe.
One last thing, in the section "Welcome to Bareshade" for the mini event whit the watchmen you need 12 of lewd fame, the events change if you are submissive or dominant, the encounter is RNG and there's no specific day for Tom or Andrey it depends of which one is on duty.
That's all I found so far I hope that helps.