Loved so much about this, especially the story and artwork. One thing I did find trouble with was the escape room, since I felt it took too much time and the beginning of it just felt like you had to click random stuff to continue. It also wasn’t clear whether you had done something correct, but again it could’ve have been the point.
Beside that, I did love the demo and I’m excited to see what happened between them all. Also I already love August and Noah’s interactions, which is just setting myself up for pain considering the opening scene.