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Thanks! I did make this to make something with Ren’Py, to get better at writing, and to figure out how to use voice acting.

1: Thanks! I’ll show the voice actress that played Clara your comment (I’ve also shown her the other feedback we’ve got).

2: Yeah, I intended to have two more songs (with and without lyrics) but didn’t have time to write them. I think I will try to write them when I have the time.

3: Thanks for pointing that out. There were some inconsistencies that happened because I changed things in some places and forgot to change them in others (next time I’ll write a proper outline first). And I guess I should try to get better at writing, in English and in general.

4: That was an edited photograph because I was running out of time. The photograph was taken in September where there wasn’t snow, so I tried to add it into the photograph, but yeah, it didn’t quite turn out well.

I hope this was helpful and that I see some of your work in the future.

Thanks! I’m planning on participating in more jams, so I’ll take this feedback into account then. And I’ll also try to make a 1.2 version with more music and maybe some tweaks to the script, especially if I decide to make more characters sing songs.