Thank you for this game!
It had more content than I expected, but considering it’s a 1-month jam, I shouldn’t be surprised to see some VNs in par with Nanoreno entries!
At first, the pixelized art (yet not pixel art) bothered me, but I got used to it. The heart dot on every “i” letter in the font too, but I also got used to it.
I feel like the main branching decision is obvious to the experimented player, however from the point of view of the character, the impact of decision X on event Y is not exactly clear, it feels like you just “unlocked” an event leading to a different path.
The cover change, esp. after bad ending, has a pretty strong impact.
About audio, I think the “hit” SFX repeated multiple times when characters are angry and shout is a little too much, as they don’t exactly hit stuff. It’s a bit similar to the screen shake in Phoenix Wright, but this VN is not really over-the-top, so I think it fits less well.
Now for the less glamorous parts, here is a list of typos I’ve found:
“Sily Noli!” -> “Silly” “sine you already know” -> “since” “‘mercenaries’(she” -> “‘mercenaries’ (she” (with space) “Hears Kingdom” -> “Hearts Kingdom”