The art was great. The layout was effectively retro. The glitchy GUI toward the end was also fantastic.
Regarding the story, I felt like the horror scenes were wonderfully well-written. This was an interesting depiction of a yandere character. As a multichapter fic writer, I can relate to the affirmation I get from comments and the abandonment I feel when regular commenters disappear without explanation. Correct us if we're wrong, but we must've gotten the true ending on the first try since we could no longer replay the VN. My teammate and I considered this an inventive gameplay mechanic.
Overall, great job on your jam entry!