I stoped at the scene where Cole was angry at Hammish for being a hypocrite and not telling the truth.
As again, i want to say that i liked your novel! But i think i liked it as a single story per chapter (Like the chp1,2) With a start-midle-end. And chapter 3 was like that until the midle started go on and on and i wasn’t prepared for it bcs i get used to previous chapters, i got tired of reading and closed it. … so yeah that all
Ps still i think the novel is good and Ilia imo is literally the strongest being in that world! rly! (]3ASED ]3IRD M O M)