Awesome game mate!
Storyline, Story telling, character development, comedic relief, graphics, creativity are all so on point it's actually quite fantastic. As someone who does not usually play these types of games I'm really pleasantly surprised!
My only feedback (if you are taking it): It would be good to see the bodies of the girls a little more diverse.
e.g. Annie is meant to be the cute little gamer girl, however she still looks very curvy with her tits/butt. Likewise, Penny who has the 'best tits' in the game looks similar to Dalia/Nancy; and IMO it takes away from her. My personal opinion is making the bodies a little more different would make them much more unique and more specific to the characters!