What a brilliant story xou've written so far! n_n Not only is the plot alluring, but the pace is done perfectly~ UwU Xou've contrived a unique list of characters, done a great job with the world building, drawn some lovely art, and kudos for straying from the gullible type of MC that accepts everything at face value! :P I really like how relatable he is :)
And making this VN even better is how freaking big xour 1irst update is! xD I was so sad when it ended "^__^ Can't wait for more~ keep up all the great work~! >_</