The amount of visual polish in this is absolutely insane! Props to the artist(s) and everyone who worked on making it look as smooth as it does and the attention to detail such as making Christie's handwriting genuinely different from Ajay's. The story is also cute and promises many more adventures in the future, seeing as there's some locked areas, so I would love to see it continue. I definitely like Ajay (He tries his best) and Kurt (Is her name a pun on being "curt"? If so, that's hilarious).
I went to the correct place on my first playthrough out of luck, but tried something else the second time to see how it would redirect me. I think more interactivity would be cool since it was pretty easy to deduce what to do next and I would have liked to do some more "solving", but since this is just the start of their adventures it may get harder later. Please keep me updated if you continue writing it!