The story is very good in this one! It’s well thought out and well written! The “puzzles” make sense in the story as well. And the art is good too.
The platforming could use some work. It’s pretty difficult. And the music could be backed off a bit on volume and change from the organ-grinding track to something else for some relief. And lastly, the dialog could be slowed down or better have the player hit a button to advance to allow for those slower at reading to get a chance to enjoy it.
All in all, this is a well put together game, despite some of the minor flaws.
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