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alright so first that VN is SO GOOD !!!

i've heard of it accidentally on twitter and i decided to download it to see what it was about and BOY i was not disapointed!

all the characters are really lovely even if one of them is an ass, the scenes are beautifully drawn they all have their own unique little details, the story is catching etc etc...

But i've noted small problems too:

1- sometimes MC is speaking to a character but it looks like he's talking in his head because his name is nowhere to be seen and there's no quotation marks.

2- At one time Marruk is speaking but his name is still stuck to "doc".

So yeah there's small problems here and there but it will not ruin your reading experience.

Anyway i love this novel i'm so hype for the next update!! 

PS: i was expecting like 2 days in game and then a "To be continued..." screen but i was happily surprised to see that you've wrote A LOT MORE than what i was anticipating.

I love this one you have no idea (>_>)

thanks again for your work ! 

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Ah well if you run into the issues please feel free to reach out to me so I can fix them! I have fixed a few already but I'm sure there are many more x.x And thank you! The writing has been a fun aspect for me so I enjoy making the updates as long as I can manage.