1. The graphics of the gameplay itself looks great (actually quite good for a jam) yet all the other graphics look pretty bad, especially the old-style-movie intro text
2. Why to make invisible map boundaries when you have containers?
3. Dialogs are too long
4. You have to reread the whole second part of the dialog if you get killed and there is no option to skip it
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