Thank you so much for your detailed and thoughtful response. I completely agree that turning up the groove and almost going off the rails would have been really fun! I should have done that, but I think I was intending to tone down the energy so that the loop is smoother. I didn't end up submitting it in loop form though so a bigger ending would have made this even better! I appreciate your feedback!
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Hey, I appreciate you taking what I said to heart -- the ending is totally understandable in the context of originally going for a loop. Like I said: the piece was already great, and my critique was basically just me being greedy and wanting *MOAR* 😆
I'm sure you got more great stuff coming down the pike -- best of luck with your future projects! 🎷