I like the story and the atmosphere so far. The MidJourney look works pretty well too. A lot of Sandman vibes to it. But, the dialog writing is not very good, pretty cringey at times even. That's of course a tough one to get right.
Now it's clear to me that I did version 0.1 in a hurry, because I was too impatient and wanted something to appear online. I am working on version 0.2 at a reasonable pace. I corrected a lot of grammatical errors, rewrote a lot of badly written fragments and revised dialogues by reading them aloud to myself. Now I am creating new chapters.