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hi i have some feedback for you i noticed some spelling errores in the chapter was well as grammer errores but other that its seems well writen and nice CGI and if you are welling i could help fix that and proof read it before it goes live, and i must say i like it a lot and cant wait to see where it goes as a good V.N.

Send spelling errors on discord if you don`t mind.

Thank you.

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could get me a raw copy of the script as a *.TXT file and i edit it and send it back to you  i am now online added the link to discord

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its done, i had a day on my own and was able to go through it in record time and uploaded it to discord !!!

Thank you.

no problem are you working on 0.2 yet ???

Yeah, but i can only work on it in my free time, so it's going very slowly for now.

ok let me know when you want to do the never one and  will do a off line closed beta test and proof read so we can get it spot on !!!

did you get the proof read and edited file i helped you out with ???

No i didn't get the file.