Hey it's the game based on my shitpost. Thanks for the in-game shoutout at the end.
This is pretty cool. Reminds me of the ancient online fad of bite-sized sequential storytelling.
I love the art, in particular the enemy designs.
I can visualize how the password system could be used in all sorts of interesting, less obvious ways. How would you translate that to book format?
I remember I had a book as a kid that came with a special sort of lens that would let you see invisible text, so I guess that could be an idea for a trick up your sleeve if you want.
It would be nice if you could turn the page by dragging it when applicable.
A bookmark feature would be convenient for navigation but I suppose that might get in the way when you want to restrict players from returning to a location.