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I'm loving it! I've already done a review though, so I wanted to note some mistakes I found.

The big one is that chapter 3 had me as having fooled around with Sophia, which didn't happen. I didn't react to her flirting. It is referenced in the chapter 3 intro and in a bit of dialogue between her and B when they are revealing their past.

The small ones are not a big deal, but if Sophia is meant to never break from using somebody's full name, I found a few instances where she slips at that:

  • In T's diner when she is investigating Gaia's Cradle: "That is peculiar. Either she and Lisa had in-depth conversations about their physical condition..."
  • In her conversation with Aiden in his dad's basement: "You need not stay here. Could Sylvia not relocate you, with her resources...?"
  • In the conversation with B where they are revealing their past: "For all I know, you could have killed Lisa!"
  • In the same conversation she only uses the main character's first name: "That is true, Firstname, but there are other factors here"