Interesting use of the dialogue, I think it fits good enough with the music, giving it some choesion to the theme, quite memorable. It would have been pretty sick if you tried experimenting with different dog sound samples/barks and using them as instruments for the pads and synths, and using them in a way that conveis the emotional situation of the dogs 🐶 . That could help to make this already good entry in to a super memorable one.
Overall that was very nice, congrats!