Alright, here goes.
Nice opening. Really like that LFO'd electric piano. Lovely. Oh, nice synths. Really like all the detailing going on in the upper mid frequencies with those fluttery synths. They add some lovely texture to the whole thing. I'm just picturing small sparklers floating around. Cool idea of pitching the drums and using it as bass. Nice lead line too. Oh that vocal-like synth sound is really nice too. I really like how it complements the rest. Nice outro by going back to the basics. Well done! Very enjoyable tune.
This is only your fourth track? Crazy. It sounds great. It definitely sounds a lot better than the fourth track I ever made. Heck, it sounds better than a lot of the stuff I do nowadays even (after years of practice). I'm impressed.