I just finished v0.5 and I'd like to give a personal feedback; no criticisms, just opinions and wishes.
Firstly, I undestand the similarity with MNF, unfortunately even with the same 'jap' characters' graphic; I would avoid to show MC ugly face if possible.
Second, more important; personally I'l really like to have intercourses among the women/girls. Having 4 hot ladies in the same bed should lead to some actions among them, and this also for Susan-Liz-Marion (as it happens in MNF), maybe even with the Grandmother (I don't recall the name now). Some (inxest) lesbianism is wellcome.
Third: please do no expand to much the NCPs; this will confuse and disperse the story. You already have 7 women, at least, to play with.
Four: since I am a watersport lover, I'd love to see some content with this fetish; MNF has a real minimunm (too little unfortunately) content,
One last think about the plot: I do not understand Marion generosity in giving such a big and nice house to Liz (which is the relationship with Marion?) instead of give that to Susan that have now 4 other people to host.
Said all this, thanks for your commitment and my very best wishes for the next future