This one is slightly better than the first one, overall the colors match tough you'd want to add some more black in her body cause the black head with the soft colors just looks out of place, the clothes are really simple too, simplicity isn't a bad thing but she looks like some kind of angel or divine being and the clothes don't match that at all, maybe try a longer skirt and some longer sleeves? Anyways I'll just give this a 6.5/10
Again don't take it seriously I rate my own ocs too 😭