I was seriously considering getting the full version since a lot of the storylines had interesting ideas and I wanted to see where you were planning to go with these. It also seemed pretty well made and thought through. Then I unfortunately decided to play the soldier storyline for completions sake.
Not only does most of the stuff not make sense, at least not in a world that functions on even remotely similar laws of physics, the way she defeated things no one else could frankly seemed like an asspull most of the time. The attempt of adding a moral dilemma seemed like exactly that, an attempt. She is angry that people would harm her men after they literally invaded a city and goes from calling her own people vile monsters to lamenting their deaths in a matter of seconds. She watches women getting raped by her own subordinates and then asks herself whether she is a good person. The story goes from literal deathtrap to easy win to sharing the backround story of a character that only got lightly wounded in a few lines.
But hey, I might have still considered buying it in hopes that the other storylines might be better. That is until someone thought it was funny to literally announce a mass raping on camera. I'm not saying that things like this never happened historically speaking, but as an author you very much have the freedom to decide what to include and what not. And if you for some reason want to include things like that, at least add a content warning beforehand, so that people who aren't comfortable with things like that can chose to stop reading beforehand
So please, even if you decide that I simply wasn't the intended target audience and that my complaints about the writing are just a matter of personal preference and that I'm taking things too seriously or completely missing the whole point, please add content warnings. It can ruin the entire game for people otherwise
And if the described problems are exclusive to the demo still consider fixing them, it's how you're trying to convince people that your game is worth buying after all