This turned out great! I really enjoyed playing your game!
The art was very nice, neat and fit the theme.
I like how you incorporated all those mechanics into the addictive gameplay, and the comic ending!
Hinting the secret stuff really kept me going (besides the nature of the gameplay), well thought addition to the text!
This is awesome, and it's your first jam! You should be proud of finishing such an enjoyable game! Keep up.