I loved this story and your writing!
I played through two paths and I really liked the outcome of both.
Spoilers: I took the "sleep"and "sword" path, and the former was so graceful! The sword one was so cool and I felt powerful.
But, I wanted to see more of the consequences of my choices. Maybe after a couple of paths, a new branch could appear, and it is in the future. Of course it would complicate things, but it would be so cool! hahaha