Your character's stance captures very well a sense of desperation, fear and determination. I feel like it is a much more intimate and personal battle you depict, though, than the song track with its large scope. I also feel like a bit more lighting contrast would help me to see the details better and give the scene more depth. I am immediately drawn in by your character, though, and want to know more. I see you have a visual novel, which has also drawn me in, and I look forward to continuing it. You exhibit strength at recounting a larger story though personal details - thanks for sharing your work :) For others who want to see it https://momercury.itch.io/the-night-that-never-ends