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About me: I have almost no idea about horses and prefer games that have a goal. So that you can put the criticism into perspective.

In general it is a good one page RPG. You know what to do and you get a good idea of the gameplay.


As a dyslexic, I had a bit of trouble reading it. The font is a bit difficult, especially the distinction between f, t, i and l.

I also noticed a few phrases that didn't sound right to me. But since I have English as a second language, I could be completely wrong. Therefore, please ignore all my suggestions. Oh, and the file names should ideally also be in English. I didn't know what "liggande" was. :)

Bottom line: It makes you want to try it out, I like the character sheet and especially as a debut work I find it quite good.

Thank you for your comments! I'll be looking into the phrasing (it needs to be alright to read for us ESL people as well, so of course your opinion on the language used is valid) and do some updates to the files, as well as make a version with another font. Is there one in particular that is easier to read, or should I default to Arial?

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Thank you for the feedback on the feedback.

: )

Personally, I always try the Atkinson Hyperlegible.

https://brailleinstitute.org/freefont

You can download it on Google Font, too.