Mostly the one in the apartment, it looks a bit too desolate, partially due to the lack of color, but also because of how unnervingly symmetrical it looks, with all the rectangles and sharp edges. If the intent was to portray the emptiness of it, since Howl is moving or smth else, it's mostly alright as is. That being said, I'm happy to see your approach to the VN genre, I hope you'll get to enjoy and learn even more from it in the future, happy to see more of your stories and characters 😀