Thank you so much for the awesome game! I enjoyed your writing, and the character developments have been exceptional. Also, Ally is so adorable :D
Maybe one constructive critic I could give is that there was at one point I was too lazy to spam delivery job just to earn enough money to upgrade the hotel, and it sort of feel like the story with the characters were time-gated in bad way. And it don't feel good when you're dying to push the story with a character further. I do not know if this was intentional or there are other ways to get money quicker, since I ended up using cheat code.
But despite that, I get to enjoy the lovely-crafted characters you have created, and it was worth the time spent. So, I'll be leaving you with a 5 star :)