Right, I just started, but I'm a passionate pedant, and gotta ask this:
The intro mentions he doesn't live far away, and later it says "several blocks away" - how the hell do you need a 15 min cab ride for that?
I don't know how far "several blocks" is, but it can't be more than a mile. Can't you walk that? They don't look that badly out of shape.
(Not hating on it, mind you, it just confuses me)
Edit: A bit later he says five blocks isn't too far to walk - so just how far is the other place?
I am sorry if you feel hurt by my comment, it was done after I had read a lot of cry for other thing then the game offered, like pregancy and so on.
As said, games are mostly fantasy, in fantasy everything are allowed, except if one make a fantasy games or books that shall mirror the real life.
I assume p games dont mirror real life, and when you asked about distances and time, as in real life, it become the drop that broke the fence for me:)
So again I am sorry, the same I am for my writing which is far from good enough but hopefully understandebal :)
All good. I get being upset at the whining, I really didn't consider the context of my post.
I have weird compulsions and obsessions, where some part of my brain will rip me out of the story to point out dumb things and not let it go. Particularly things like distances and time are a weird thing for me. It's not that it makes the game bad, it's just a thing my brain notices and I have to make an effort to ignore it.
I'm also not a fan of using a car if it's not needed, but that's a different topic.
I'm sorry my comment upset you, and I'm glad we could settle this in a friendly manner. Have Fun!
