Brings flashbacks of my own writing in the far far past. Though I did look up the previous story in this series I still at times found it confusing to keep track of who was who and what they were doing. Maybe a short recap at the start for those who can't or won't read the prequel to get this story's readers up to speed, and maybe some details to tell us who these people stuck in the Funhouse are. I still have no clue, and I kind of really want to know so I can feel invested in them. Keep writing and reading and observing. Find your voice and don't stop sharing it with us.