I think this game has a lot of potential! The artwork is really good and the story is very interesting. There are a few things that are really annoying however. I read very quickly so I typically like to click on a textbox to have all of the text populate immediately, however some textboxes show all the text and others just skip the textbox entirely and I end up never being able to read what was written. Secondly, my first experience of the game was already negative right when you start the interaction with Vera. I had failed the interaction with her 3 times causing me to wait 8 minutes before progressing the game. This is not a good mechanic, I might suggest increasing the odds each time a player fails or just making a new story route for a failure. I have learned through my experience in game design that making the player do nothing is going to give them a bad experience if there is no reason for it.