Really nice contribution, nice clean layout. Would go well with some restrained b&w line art, or stipple point (like what I see in some Mothership 1e artwork).
Q) With XP & Carousing, does that mean I can earn XP "twice" on the same credits? i.e. get XP from selling some treasure for credits, then spending those on Carousing, for more XP?
Talents are a nice idea, I would probably be lazy and link it to level progression (reminds me of WH Dark Heresy leveling).
I like the 2d6 generator for Planets - looking forward to more generators for both larger scale (systems) and smaller scale (cities).
Would love to expand the Faction section - more generators like the Planet section?
I really like the Faction Goal Progression part, seems simple but still useful, especially the note around player interference in that goal progression - that would be a great trigger for designing adventures, reviewing goal progression/regression.
As a fan of ItO - thank you for sharing, I enjoyed reading this. I'll keep an eye on this game.