I didn't read it like the one liked the player at all. Given how hard she tried to prove the other wrong about the player it seemed like they thought very - pardon the pun - little of them.
And I'm aware it's not NTR in true essence, but it definitely read like a scene out of the genre. I appreciate you listening to feedback, though. Just the scene felt awkward after the other scene you have with the one character. Trying not to spoil, but it happens in the player's room.
Oh, and regarding leaving the shower scene it keeps proccing even after I've left it like three times. I keep trying to say no, but it just won't let go. So wasn't sure what was going on there.