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A take on the classic line drawing / connecting puzzle game. I've always enjoyed these a lot. It seems you got the main concept down. If only there were more levels / some real puzzles. But then puzzle design can be quite difficult. 

That being said you said you wanted constructive criticism. Obviously some nice clicky sound effects would add a lot :D. But yeah all in all more levels / proper puzzles. There are some fantastic talks about puzzle design hit me up on the discord and I can send you the links :D.

On a second note. if you make more puzzles for this I'd be down to playtest them.