I like the story as a whole, yet it's a mostly linear story unless you choose to exclude a girl. Would be more interesting if you had to make more consequential choices along the way where going after one girl cost you the others. This would make it more of a balancing act, especially when you get so many to juggle. Still, like it anyway and get why it's the way it is for simplicity.
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I don't think you are getting what I mean. Maybe check out my game at https://efon.itch.io/pervert-action-origins
It's fairly short, only being 9 choices long, but branches greatly, with some endings giving you full harems, while others don't.