"a wish" Sounds both hopeful, but not overly positive, there's definitely still a struggle there. At the end, it's as if everything starts falling apart though. And then I can totally feel the anguish in "hopeful wish".
Really like the sounds used in this and how they're utilized. I really like the high notes carrying the melody. Reminds me of when I dipped my toes in this type of music. This is sort of I had imagined it would sound. It is not... how I managed to make it sound.
The melodies caught my attention throughout, great job!