this. i'm not even done yet with all of the chapters so far and i know it's amazing hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
i have so much respect for you because i can't even make a good enough sentence with at least 15 words for my english homework. and if i do, it looks like an elementary kid did it
um spoilers below
and i don't really know how long this has to be
so i'll just put random sh lol
i have a folder dedicated to finding typos and
weird
english stuff
for this game
and i'm using a 2nd character for this
hee hee 🥰
and then it isn't long enough and
this is just an annoyingly long
comment
ok anyways
not my problem (well actually it is)
"Where are we going?" you ask, your voice small.
cirlces. CIRLCES??????? nah but it's ok i guess
circles*
"I am not staying with this man," you declare.
well it's missing the pronoun/noun. could be "Mama says softly." or "she says softly."
"Alright, Mama," you agree.
not cirlce again 😭😭
encircle*
"What's is to you?" you snarl.
- choice
- the result or whatever
well.... technically you just said "What is is to you?"
it*
"Bring the knives, [insert name]," Ahlf commands.
"...as to Ahlf was." what. it's missing a "who"
as to who Ahlf was.*
stall man merchant
"It fits neatly into your palm, a small and detailed." 'a' should not be there. even grammarly agrees
"It fits neatly into your palm, small and detailed."*
do you want to learn more about the Ancient Ones
"What say you?" wth happened here. i don't know if it's meant to be like that
"What do you say?"*
yeah i wanna learn more
"You eyes the idols." a
"You eye the idols."*
But instead of finding the worn book, you find a closed box
"...you reach out for the first folded, page." remove the comma after 'first folded'
you reach out for the first folded page.*
"I was just watching from the cottage," you snap in anger.
"...and the look his gaze becomes hard." well it's missing an 'in'
and the look in his gaze becomes hard.*
"I don't have to obey your every command," you hiss.
"...before he looks way." well it is certainly missing an 'a'
before he looks away.*
anyways at this point my itch.io is breaking but it's okay since i'm done with everything i've found so far
idk if some of them are intentional since.... maybe it's just ancient grammar or something. i mean, it is the 500s 🤷♀️
nOW MY LAPTOP IS BREAKING .