Very interesting. The art and music were neat. Nice use of public domain background images. I've never played a narrative game before, so this was a new experience for me. It'll take a while for me to process it. I have no sense of which decisions did or didn't impact the story, but it all seemed fairly smooth, so good job on the writing, too. I only spotted one minor typo, (an "and" that should have been "an", if I remember correctly), which is pretty good for so much text. Very cool character design. It'd be neat to see what you could come up with in a longer form game of similar genre. :)