My Only Wish: The panning effect of the chirping high arpeggio feels magical like stars are falling around me. My favorite part of this track is the B section you wrote at 0:45 and how the harmony seems to rise hopefully. The rising energy into the C section keeps the momentum of the emotions going upward.
Searching for you in the Sea Side A: Your melody shares similarities with the song “Kiss from a Rose” by Seal which is an incredibly beautiful song. I really like your use of diegetic sounds to make the ocean wave sound, the heartbeat, and the heavy breathing noises.
Meteor Shower: These ambient twinkling sounds feel like stars, which is probably what you intended. This is such a calm ambience.
Disastrous Twist: I like that this starts as a combo of the last two tracks. The storm sounds increasing do a great job foreshadowing the danger that emerges when the melody starts getting distorted and dissonant. The disaster is palpable as this piece grows!
A Strange Place: The drums make this new place sound exotic and maybe tropical. The storm must have blown the main character off course. My favorite part of this track is the fun bassline.
Stars in the Forest at Night: I like how relaxed this track it with the bird, cricket, and frog noises. The build-up is subtle, but effective at allowing action to grow through the forest exploration.
Searching for you in the Sea Side B: This is a nice return of this theme. I like that it builds up differently indicating that it possibly means something different to the main character this time.
Finale: I like that you conclude with an epic dance-like beat and then return to the main theme. This is a great conclusion to your story and makes it feel like you are successful in your search for your lost love. Overall this was a fun soundtrack to listen to. Great work and thank you for sharing!