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Its surprising how many positive comments are on this game. I feel its a trend these types of creators delete all negative or constructive comments, seems this is one of those situations.
For one the art is armature at best, sure making sprites and backgrounds is hard, but when you release a game like this you want their perspective correct and color palettes to work. Multiple shots in this game are an eye strain with random colors thrown in, and several frames have wonky and obviously incorrect perspective/proportions, not to mention the tracing of almost every car, or hand model. In a final game, mistakes like these wont work. Not to mention the main character is this neon clusterfuck of colors with no rhyme or reason to his design other than being "different" from the other characters already created, but still having the objectively tired emo look.
The writing is subpar, nothing is amazing or horrible about it, its just average. It's like if you picked up a YA novel and flipped to the first romantic pairing scene and copied it into a code. Guess that's all I have to say, hard to believe that all the comments under this thread are positive with no ounce of criticism.

I know you twitter goonies will come after me, but everything other than the writing is objectively facts and not opinion based. Stop deleting comments, you as a creator should be responsible for your own hate.

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lol, >talks about colour palettes, "objectively tired emo look" and etc, while saying everything you say is objective other than writing criticism... hmmm.

the character's colour scheme looks nice to me, game just another one out of many many VNs i been browsing through tonight but your comment and it convinces me to play it now...

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FINALLY! Personally, I enjoyed the gameplay a bit. The art is not the best, the developer is clearly an amateur. The story was a little short and fast, we didn't get that much information about Friend. Pre-existing relationships are kinda hard to go with. And yes, the color schemes are sometimes a mess ^^'. I'm glad somebody said something eventually, we can't always pretend like everything someone makes is perfect. We all need to be criticized.

Sorry for my broken English, it's not my mother language. 

God bless :)

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*amateur not armature

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hey moron, at least spellcheck your criticism if you're going to be a smartass. 

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pretentious twat is pretentious 

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I'm sorry, but since when do game devs of VNs delete comments that are either negative or criticizing the game? I've never seen anyone do that at all, no matter what game I played. Your comment is anything but criticism, you're just being judgmental. And it's pretty funny how you address us who praise this game as "Twitter goonies." FYI, Einstein, not everyone who likes this game came from Twitter. Your take on this is just really bad.

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This comment is littered with so much unnecessary hate towards the creator omfg. Seems you didn't like it; you could have kept that to yourself and left out the unneeded conclusion jumping.