Do you not have a native English speaker proofreading and correcting the English version?
It's pretty bad... tons of grammatical errors and stilted unnatural sounding English.
I would be willing to correct your English version for you myself if you want.
I wrote down several corrections and re-writes of the English version's intro section and submitted to the Bug reports section of your discord, take a look and let me know if you would like me to do more. This game would vastly benefit from someone who knows how to write in English.