Oh yeah no worries. I can take the heat :P
No the map was forgiveable, it was not a death sentence, I meant to say that he missed the map and I would count that against him but is not fatal. The last section was very chunky, and the organization of the elements was not as good as the other dungeons, otherwise it would have easily made the cut. The first section is very strong and he's since rewritten his material I think? Cool guy.
https://thiefofwhispers.wordpress.com/2022/08/26/spears-of-the-northmen-an-adven...
I play about half TotM combat with only a previously noted marching order/formation in my current game. Owlbears makes it pretty easy to do more complex combat. I played ToM a lot when I was into Dark Heresy.
I hope you get some use out of the rest.