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I really like the VN and looking forward to the next parts, but I have one criticism


[Spoiler]


Every Build Ends with a fight or a kidnapping. I know it’s for story telling purposes, bat after some time it leaves a dry aftertaste.

(Sorry for mistakes, english isn’t my native language and and no, I don’t know how to properly mark the spoiler)

So what I predict is that the kidnappings will happen a few more times throughout the storyline, and between there will be breakthroughs in the MC's character. As in a strength or skill that they will attain, so as to make them more impervious to an attack.